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首先是邮件的标题,教授每天都会收到很多的邮件,所以一个简洁、清晰的邮件题目是很重要的。我们比较建议常用的标题有:

 

A prospective PHD applicant’s research interest

 

Will you admit student or assistant this year?

 

A prospective student who interested in your research

 

邮件的正文内容的撰写,下面会举出几份不同类型的文章,但是核心思想都是一样的。

 

第一封是比较推荐的,内容较为详细,事前准备比较充分的套磁信。

 

Dear Dr. XXXX,

 

Thanks for your attention paid to this mail.

 

基本的礼貌用语是一定要做到的。

 

This is XXX a senior student from XXXXUniversity in China. I am going to receive/have received my Bachelor’s degree in summer XXX and applying for theXXX Program in XXX University for 2014 fall entry. After reading your newlypublished paper (XXXXXXXX 文章名称) and otherselected publications, I find that your research on hair follicle stem cellsand its application on hair regeneration not only matches what I ’m researching on during my internship(especially something about XXX) now but also attracts me a lot. Therefore, Iam writing to wonder if there is any chance for me to do research under yoursupervision in the future.

 

第一段,简单的自我介绍,然后陈述写信目的。需要注意的是,教授会想知道,你是怎么找到我的?哦~~~原来是通过阅读我的文章(after reading your paper……),对我的研究有过实质的了解才找我的。找我干嘛?是否招 PHD?(wonder there is any chance for me)

 

I’ve been doing research in Institute of Biochemistry and CellBiology……

 

邮件题目

 

正文

 

China Academy of Sciences (SIBCB, CAS) since June this year. Duringthis summer, I’ve been working in Professor XXX’s lab, which researches on howWnt regulates mammary gland’s development and mammary gland’s tumor genesis. Myjob here is to first make knockdown and overexpression constructs of some geneswe’re interested in to do some in vitro experiments, and then to do somefurther in vivo tests. I’m happy to find that some of the genes have proved tobe related with the pathway we are researching on. At the same time, I’ve beenlearning some basic and featured techniques of the lab from senior graduates,which is interesting and meaningful.

 

第二段,接下来是进一步的自我介绍。这里的自我介绍就不再介绍基本信息或者个人兴趣,而是更进一步用自己过去的研究经历来展示自己,更重要是传递一个信息给教授:我过去所做过的是不是跟你现在或者将来的研究有重合的地方?

 

Through doing research and reading related papers, I’ve got a deeperinsight into Wnt signal pathway in regulating somatic stem cells and becomemore interesting in the research on stem cells and some related fields ondevelopment. In the future, I’m interested in finding out the key factors inregulating somatic stem cells’ development and making the result into further applications in both tumor therapy and medical regeneration.

 

这一段是对上一段的简单的总结,我掌握了 XXXX,我将来打算继续在这个领域从事怎样怎样的研究。

 

In terms of your newly published Cell paper,I’ve read it carefully and if you don’t mind, I have some questions to talkabout with you as follows:

 

1. In this paper, you focus on McSC and EpSC toexplore. I wonder how to exclude other types of cells for there may be anothercell type also secreting key factors to make a triple‐coordination.

 

2. In Figure 2, you show that after TAM induction, differentiated bulb melanocytesfrom control and mutant mice show similar expression of melanocytedifferentiation markers. According to the previous result, why mutant bulbdoesn’t show a higher expression level? Is it because the bulb has an“expression peak” or the induction doesn’t work on differentiated bulb?

 

3.In Figure 4, you show that Wnt10b has anactivation function. But why do you use Wnt7a instead in the furtherexperiments? Is it because Wnt10b cannot be purified easily?

 

4.Also in Figure 4, panel L, you show anin‐vitro experiment, but why not use in vivo instead for it may be moreconvincing?

 

接下来,就是根据之前所阅读教授的论文,做出一些提问。提问的意义有两点:1. 让教授知道你认真阅读了这些论文,了解你对他的诚意;2. 抛出问题,让教授接下来能够回复你。当然,问题的数量可以自己调整,关键是问题要尽量有一定的深度。

 

Thanks for your patience to my long mail. Yourattention is of vital importance for me. As an undergraduate student, I spentquite a long time to find my research interest. I had research projectexperience in biostatistics, protein detection, and finally find my destiny instem cells and development. I have been reading certain research papers in thisfield and a lot of them are in my schedule. To pursue my PhD research in a topuniversity in US has been my dream and your research area matches my interest,and I am also hoping to learn more in this area.

 

最后就是在读强调自己的研究兴趣和研究领域。

 

Please find my resume followed and attached ofthis e‐mail. I am looking forward to your further instructions. Thanks verymuch for reading this letter. Best regards.

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